Tuesday, 29 October 2013

Third Story Outline

For the third storyline, my lecturer don't really like the second storyline, by didn't give the impact of the story. I was really run out of my idea, and suddenly, another idea came out from my mind.

A girl walking home while she’s playing with her phone, suddenly there’s a kid accidentally knock on her and apologize to her. She looks at the child for a moment, then she smile and pat on the kid’s head, the kid then gives her a big smile. When she reaches home, she ties her hair up and sees that there’s a scar on her elbow. She looks at the scar without any expression…
“Since when I forgot to smile truly to my heart? Is it because of the scar I have on my elbow?”
When the girl was a child, she always looks at her father’s back view, as her father was addicted to computer games. Once her father loses to a game, he always beat her and uses her as his sand bag. Longer and longer, she now don’t have any feelings toward her father, even if her father passed away she didn’t even cry. Her auntie then adopted her, even though both auntie and uncle treated her very well, but she never try to believe in them due to her trauma given by her father. After dinner, she straight go into her room and continue playing her video games.
“Now I can understand why my dad always sit in front of the computer and play games. Playing games is like a drug, you will forget about everything. Even forget to… smile truly to you heart…”
After flashbacking her past, tears run down to her cheek, and starts to cry by covering he face in her hand.
“Even though the world is advance with technology and makes people happy about the device that they hold in their hand, but what is missing at the same time is… the inner feeling towards the one that they love…”




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