Tuesday, 29 October 2013

Final story outline

After reading the third story outline, my lecturer strongly disagree on the idea of changing the story. So I have to use back my previous story and improvise a little bit. Finally, my lecturer approve on it.

In the year 24XX, a girl with a gun stares at a corpse, which is lying down on the floor without any expression. After a while, she sighs then walk to a wall, which is not far from her, then sit down by the wall, look at the sky quietly. Suddenly, something captures her eyes. It is photo of a woman with three little girls in her arm. The girl glance at the photo, then for a split second she turn her head away continue watching the sky, slowly shut her eyes up…

A little girl was sitting at the corner of the house, hugging her head and trembling, watching her parents quarrel at each other. Once she cried out loud, the father immediately grab her by her collar and slap her. She’s facing this problem everyday even after her mother pass away, but no one care what had happen to her with her face full of bruises. One day, she couldn’t stand it anymore and run away from her house. When she was sitting downs by the wall and crying, a man approaches her and lends her a gun.

“Kill or to be killed?” The man asks her.

She stares at the gun for a moment, then stretch out her hand to reach the gun. When she gone back home, the father still drinking, didn’t even bother her appearance. When she go into the kitchen and grab a glass, wanted to drink water, she accidentally knock on the glass cup and it fall to the ground, broken to pieces. When the father heard the sound, he walk to her and scolding her. She then grabs a knife nearby her and kills her father.
The man who hand her the gun just now was standing outside her house waiting for her, after a while the girl came out from her house with her shirt full of blood. The man smirk then lend out his hand to her, she eventually lend her hand to his. From that day onwards, she involve in many kinds of body training, and finally she was trained to be a killer…

A click sound of a gun wake her up from her dream, eventually there’s a gun pointed at her head. She then smirk and get killed by the person who was holding the gun.

“Kill or to be killed? That is how the world that I live in…”



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