Sunday, 27 October 2013

The first story outline

Story Outline: A girl finally found inner peace within herself when she was about to kill herself.


A properly dress girl was sitting at a café reading a book. When she was about to go back, she saw some of the girls were playing at each other and it seems like they’re drunk. The expression on the girl face change rapidly when she saw those girls were drunk and their expression was not right. She quickly walks away from the place and go back home. Once she reaches home, she unties her hair and washes her face. After washing, she saw her reflection in the mirror. There are scars on her arm, chest and even throat, she recall back of her past.

Her father was a brutal man, once he gets drunk, she and her mother will be the victim of her father. Even if her mother passed away, she still couldn’t escape from her father brutal act. When she’s a teenager, she realizes that there’s no one who can save her from this situation, so her heart start to fall. As soon as she join the gangster, she start smoking, taking drug and even involve in crime. Even though everyday she seems happy as she finally release her inner self, but she still feel hollow deep inside her heart. One day, one of her friend gives her a cigarette, which contain drug inside, she stare at the cigarette and run away from her friend. After running for a few hours, she sits at an alley and took out her pocketknife, and was ready to cut through her wrist. Then there’s one young man stands in front of her, take out his jacket cover her body, then walk away. From the moment when she receives the jacket, she cries out loud. After she cried, she realizes that there’s a name card inside the man’s jacket, so she work with that man.


After recalling back, she sigh and walk out of the bathroom and look around the bedroom which there’s a queen size bed and she smile….

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