Second Story Outline

After I showed my lecturer the first story outline, his comment are very good. But he try to imagine the shot and scene which make it into video, he found out that it is too long. So, I will have to shorten the story.

Story Outline: A girl finally found inner peace within herself when she was about to kill herself.

“Please… Please save me…”

“No matter how hard I scream, no matter how hard I beg for rescue, no one will rescue me from the beginning…”

A girl was being abuse by her brutal father ever since her mother passed away. When she’s was abused, she tried to scream for help, but no one dares to lend a hand to her or report it to the police.

Until the age of about 13, she couldn’t stand it anymore, so she run away from house and begin to stays at one of her friend’s house. That friend of her lends her one small bottle of drug and challenges her for taking this drug, at the same time the friend said to her everything will be just fine after I have this drug. The girl actually believes in her friend and starts to pour that drug on a pot and then lit a candle under the pot to let it burn. She feels very happy after having this drug and she continue to have it. Until one day, she found out that the drug had finished, so she was planning to commit suicide. By looking at the knife was nearly cut through her skin, suddenly she dare not to do so, and she start crying out loud and run away. When she was crying in an alley, a man pass by and gives her his jacket then walk away. At that moment, she cry even harder, is like being release from the past.

From that moment, she start to work and force herself to quit the drug with the help of one her friend which she know when she’s working.