Much better than the last one. Be a little more adventurous with the angles. Imagine if it was a camera, play around with the tilting. Framing the figure doesn't have to be a solid profile shot (the side shot when she was sitting by the desk).
As for the bottom part of the storyboard, if you have to describe what they are doing then the storyboards aren't doing their job. The space at the bottom should be used to describe dialogue, sound effects even camera movements (zooms, pans, etc)
Much better than the last one. Be a little more adventurous with the angles. Imagine if it was a camera, play around with the tilting. Framing the figure doesn't have to be a solid profile shot (the side shot when she was sitting by the desk).
ReplyDeleteAs for the bottom part of the storyboard, if you have to describe what they are doing then the storyboards aren't doing their job. The space at the bottom should be used to describe dialogue, sound effects even camera movements (zooms, pans, etc)
So which means, I don't have to describe what the character are doing?
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